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We are learning that Basic Punctuation means that you have a capital letter at the start of a sentence, and a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark at the end of every sentence when you do a piece of writing. Here is my writing life cycle of a monarch butterfly.
You have a good sequence of ideas, a nice diagram and a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence. You do not have any full stops at the end of each line and you need to because each of your lines is a complete sentence. Therefore, you did not meet the learning outcome for this piece of writing. We will talk about your other mistakes in class.
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